Grave error: comma splice! The comma splice is one of the most egregious errors of punctuation and constitutes a grave error in work you submit to me. It is called a comma splice because a “comma is used to splice together two complete sentences when that isn’t the function of a comma.” Refer to Grammar Girl’s “Comma Splices”: for a complete explanation of the comma splice and its elimination, for eliminate it you must!
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